This is the first story I have ever written. I hope you like it.
The Doctor used his sonic screwdriver to open a cyber door and escape.
Outside the head cyber guard was shut down by the sonic waves.
The cyber guard was waking up.
The doctor ran to the TARDIS before leaving a bomb behind.
The TARDIS disappeared and the bomb exploded!!
The cyber threat was gone.
This is to prove I wrote it!
I LOVE YOUR FIRST STORY BOO! Keep going – someday you can take all of these and create a little book to inspire other kids to write too. I love the drawing as well. You should consider creating postcards to sell on your own online store someday π I will buy π
Thank you Tash. Maybe I will but that might be a bit too much. π
I really like your story, and your Cyberman picture – thank you for sharing it. Your handwriting is a lot easier to read than mine is!
Which Doctor do you think should be in your story? I know you liked David Tennant and Matt Smith – what do you think of Peter Capaldi so far?
Thank you for commenting. I am a bit into Peter Capaldi, he isn’t as funny as Matt Smith. Matt Smith would be the star of my story. I am thinking of adding Amy Pond into my story π π π
Ah yes, Amy was always good at running to the TARDIS!
I think expanding on stories can be fun. My son and I often start by writing out an idea for a story, and then he’ll think of something to add, so we rewrite it with a new bit in the middle, or we’ll work out what would happen next. Before you know it, your story has grown π
What a great story! Keep up the great work π
Thank you Carly for liking my story and blog post π maybe I will add more to it. Goodbye:)
Good job. I am anxiously waiting for the sequel!
Thank you Suzanne for liking my story and my blog post. Do you like my drawing Suzanne? I might write some more soon. Goodbye. π
A great story. Loved reading this. Well dine Ollie.
love you dad you spelt done wrong π lol. Love Dylan and Ollie π
I think I love the drawing of the cyber guard even better than the story. You are a multi-talented artist! I wonder: how come the sonic waves shut down the cyber guard?? I surely would like to read more about that!